First cut of film

This is my first cut of the opening two minutes of Intention. There are a few things which still need changing, such as, the opening water shot needs to be longer. The ending water shot has a 'pinnacle' sign which comes up which means that the editing program I am using does not have the edit. There is also an awkward zoom into him tearing up the photo, the camera is very jolty and I will be marked down if I keep it like this so will have to do some clever cutting. Also, this opening must be a minimum of two minutes so I have to make this longer.

This is my first cut so my partner must add titles and I will continue editing.